To A. R. Wallace 17 November 1873
[2 Bryanston Street, London.]
Nov. 17th. 73
The Dell | Grays Essex (Keep)
Dear Wallace
Bates has forwarded to me your note, & I shall be very glad if you will undertake the work; but I had better explain in detail what I want, as this may make all the difference in your being willing to undertake it.1 The job is not so much stiff as dull & tedious. I do not want criticisms, for I grieve to know how much we differ on many points; & in my opinion each man must publish the conclusions at which he has arrived & in which he still believes whether or not they are sound. I am in the middle of other work & a long interruption wd be a serious evil;2 so that when I called on Bates I was enquiring everywhere for a literary man who could do what I want, & I believe I have discovered one,3 but it would be incomparably better for me if you want it, This is the first time I ever thought of soliciting such aid.
I shall have to modify, & erase portions & to add others. Now I wish to write these out without the least of care of style, attending only to the sense, & to how the words & arrangement of the sentences corrected; for without much care I always write very badly.— I would have all the larger corrections well copied out. The whole book, would however, have to be gone through on account of trifling corrections, here & there inserted which would all require some consideration in regard to style & in regard to what comes before & after. I shd of course be glad to have any old faulty sentences amended. The numerical references to the foot-notes & woodcuts wd require correcting as new notes [prob] will be added; & if the pages get changed, the Headings of the pages.—
I would just glance over any corrections to the additions, & then send the whole to press, & I shd. wish not to see the proof sheets, but have them corrected for me. I apprehend there would only rarely be occasion for second proofs.— Until I have worked through my notes & references I have no idea how bulky my corrections will be; but I hope & think not very bulky
With respect to remuneration. I cd send you Vol. I when the corrections are copied in, & you could perhaps judge for what sum it would be worth your while to undertake the above specified work including the corrections of the proofs; & then you could afterwards judge whether the 2d vol had cost you more or less time.— Or there is another plan, if you prefer it. I understand from Bates that you lately undertook a very tough job in looking over examination papers,4 & you will probably remember how long a time & how much labour it has cost you; & you could keep a record of the time spent over my work & charge me according to the same scale.
I think that putting into shape, of my additions, if they prove very badly written, could take up most time.
I could order the proof-sheets, if you like it, to be sent you by the half-dozen or dozen, so as not to fritter away little bits of your time.— Mss Clowe print,5 as I have always found, very correctly.— We return home tomorrow6 & I shall set to work immediately & I suppose the work will take me some weeks, as I must go on with [improvement] of the [MS] .—
Will you kindly let me hear what you think of all that I have said, & I remain | My dear Wallace, | Yours very sincerely | Ch. Darwin
P.S. | Please keep this letter as a memorandum of what is wanted.
Footnotes
Bibliography
Descent: The descent of man, and selection in relation to sex. By Charles Darwin. 2 vols. London: John Murray. 1871.
Fichman, Martin. 2004. An elusive Victorian: the evolution of Alfred Russel Wallace. Chicago: University of Chicago Press.
Summary
Would be happy if ARW would undertake to help with correcting the proof-sheets of his revised edition of Descent. Outlines the job that would be required.
Letter details
- Letter no.
- DCP-LETT-9149
- From
- Charles Robert Darwin
- To
- Alfred Russel Wallace
- Sent from
- London, Bryanston St, 2
- Source of text
- DAR 96: 161–2
- Physical description
- ADraftS 4pp
Please cite as
Darwin Correspondence Project, “Letter no. 9149,” accessed on 26 September 2022, https://www.darwinproject.ac.uk/letter/?docId=letters/DCP-LETT-9149.xml
Also published in The Correspondence of Charles Darwin, vol. 21