To William Lonsdale [c. June 1838]
My dear Lonsdale
I have passed my pen through the paragraph, very properly objected to by the Referee.—1
To page 5, I have added a note, which I should like to be printed if not against the rules, which I suppose it is not, as the appendage is permitted.— There is however, this difference that the note refers to a period, subsequent to the publication of the abstract of the paper.— Will you tear it up if against rules?—2
I cannot make up my mind whether the last sentence of the formerly appended page is ridiculous— it is I believe, quite true, but yet it sounds absurd. will you have the kindness to strike it ought, if it so appears to you.—3
I do not know whether the English of the paper wants improving. I cannot see anything obviously wrong.—
Yours ever truly | Chas Darwin
Monday. Morning36 Great Marlbr’ Stt.—
P.S. I will send the report Mr Austen’s paper soon.—4
Footnotes
Bibliography
Austen, Robert Alfred Cloyne. 1838. On the origin of the limestones of Devonshire. [Read 25 April 1838.] Proceedings of the Geological Society of London (1833–8): 669– 70.
Collected papers: The collected papers of Charles Darwin. Edited by Paul H. Barrett. 2 vols. Chicago and London: University of Chicago Press. 1977.
‘Formation of mould’: On the formation of mould. [Read 1 November 1837.] Transactions of the Geological Society of London 2d ser. 5 (1840): 505–9. [Shorter publications, pp. 124–7.]
Summary
Responds to report of the referee [on his paper "The formation of mould"]. Strikes out a paragraph and wants to add a note. Asks WL’s advice about a sentence.
Letter details
- Letter no.
- DCP-LETT-417
- From
- Charles Robert Darwin
- To
- William Lonsdale
- Sent from
- London, Gt Marlborough St, 36
- Source of text
- American Philosophical Society (Mss.B.D25.)
- Physical description
- ALS 3pp
Please cite as
Darwin Correspondence Project, “Letter no. 417,” accessed on 11 October 2024, https://www.darwinproject.ac.uk/letter/?docId=letters/DCP-LETT-417.xml
Also published in The Correspondence of Charles Darwin, vol. 2